ZealouslyStriving Posted February 28, 2024 Posted February 28, 2024 This is a song/anthem I wrote on June 27th, 2023 as I sat pondering the martyrdom and reading D&C 135: "The Testimony is Sealed" (triumphantly) Like a lamb to the slaughter Went the prophet of the Lord And left a name and fame That can ne'er be slain! Chorus: It is sealed! It is sealed ! The testimony is sealed! By the best blood of that generation the testimony is sealed! Ever faithful his dear brother Went with him to certain death And on that fateful June day Breathed his final breath! (Chorus) In life they weren't divided And in death not seperated The two brothers e'er united Shed their martyr's blood! (Chorus) 1
Pyreaux Posted March 1, 2024 Posted March 1, 2024 (edited) I used to have a thought that Joseph's martyrdom could actually be a blood sacrifice for mending the Everlasting Covenant (the Testament) that was broken since the Apostasy. It makes sense to me, reforge the broken oath with blood, but Jesus was to be the last blood sacrifice. So, it its might be poetic symmetry of ancient times when the High Priests offered their own blood. Edited March 2, 2024 by Pyreaux
Calm Posted March 1, 2024 Posted March 1, 2024 (edited) On 2/29/2024 at 9:26 PM, Pyreaux said: Jesus was to be the last blood sacrifice And his Atonement is infinite. Other sacrifices were types, foreshadows; they did not mend anything. Only Christ was able to mend the Covenant being the only divine and sinless sacrifice. Symbolic symmetry or being about something besides the Atonement if not purely symbolic makes more sense to me. Edited 15 hours ago by Calm 2
Stargazer Posted March 2, 2024 Posted March 2, 2024 On 2/28/2024 at 10:19 PM, ZealouslyStriving said: This is a song/anthem I wrote on June 27th, 2023 as I sat pondering the martyrdom and reading D&C 135: "The Testimony is Sealed" (triumphantly) Like a lamb to the slaughter Went the prophet of the Lord And left a name and fame That can ne'er be slain! Chorus: It is sealed! It is sealed ! The testimony is sealed! By the best blood of that generation the testimony is sealed! Ever faithful his dear brother Went with him to certain death And on that fateful June day Breathed his final breath! (Chorus) In life they weren't divided And in death not seperated The two brothers e'er united Shed their martyr's blood! (Chorus) What's the tune?
ZealouslyStriving Posted March 4, 2024 Author Posted March 4, 2024 On 3/2/2024 at 2:52 AM, Stargazer said: What's the tune? The stanzas (?) are vaguely reminiscent of "Joseph Smith's First Prayer". The chorus is all it's own. I don't read or write music, I need someone to help me with that. Maybe there's an app?
Alch Posted March 4, 2024 Posted March 4, 2024 I really like this! There are a few things I wonder about, though. In the first verse, the words start sorrowful, but then reach more positive at the end. No problems with that, it's a good progression of ideas. However, the second verse goes from noble, which can work with sorrowful, but then goes darker, which would be really hard to work with the positive note of the first verse. The third verse takes the triumphant theme to it's climax. That works with the nobility that was in the second verse, but not as well with the first. Now the second half jumps from positive, to negative, to positive. It would be a challenge to create voicings which could communicate all this. More likely I'm reading into the more crude interpretations of some phrases, and you probably have a much better idea of the emotion that you want each one to be enveloped in.
ZealouslyStriving Posted March 7, 2024 Author Posted March 7, 2024 On 3/4/2024 at 9:43 AM, Alch said: However, the second verse goes from noble, which can work with sorrowful, but then goes darker, which would be really hard to work with the positive note of the first verse. It is meant to be triumphant throughout. No somber notes. It celebrates the faith and courage of Hyrum to go with his brother to the inevitable.
ZealouslyStriving Posted 19 hours ago Author Posted 19 hours ago I recently discovered Suno AI and was thus able to bring my song to life! https://suno.com/s/SBuOLvVpU29X5yVz I also have a much more, uh, aggressive version, if anyone is interested.
ZealouslyStriving Posted 18 hours ago Author Posted 18 hours ago I'm still experimenting with the sound but I think the following Messianic/Celtic fusion sound will be the sound of my completely made up singing group: https://suno.com/s/q0tyBrQnDaixgtNV
longview Posted 12 hours ago Posted 12 hours ago On 2/29/2024 at 9:26 PM, Pyreaux said: I used to have a thought that Joseph's martyrdom could actually be a blood sacrifice for mending the Everlasting Covenant (the Testament) that was broken since the Apostasy. It makes sense to me, reforge the broken oath with blood, but Jesus was to be the last blood sacrifice. So, it its might be poetic symmetry of ancient times when the High Priests offered their own blood. Many years ago I attended BYU Education Week. One class was on whether Abe Lincoln ever read the Book of Mormon he supposedly borrowed out of the library. The presenter believes Pres. Lincoln was to seal his testimony in blood as a sacrifice for making this major reformation for eliminating slavery and for preserving the Union.
Calm Posted 11 hours ago Posted 11 hours ago 26 minutes ago, longview said: The presenter believes Pres. Lincoln was to seal his testimony in blood Of the Book of Mormon or something else?
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